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Spiritual Feelings

Early morning on arriving home kicked off my shoes all alone switched on the computor and a man came to me. He said i have spirits around me for you i was speaking to this man for one or two times before, and what he did say was very accurate to all the things he put across on my plate. He told me of a child that didnt touch earth and wasn`t because of a bad timed birth we were young at school,and alot with fear also my partner had a prosperous carreer. That`s why we chose have it terminated i wasn`t happy and looking back now hated the fact that he or she would of been around twenty5 it`s own carreer healthy and alive, He touched on a number of other subjects some could relate to and others reject but to go from a picture on my from my file for an hour spiritual feelings were worth the while. P.Beadnall

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Date: 7/14/2011 8:41:00 PM
inner reflections of an attentive mind, paul.. thank you for joining my MASK contest.... could you kindly check the spelling of the word "lonliness" in your 2nd verse; you might mean " loneliness.." i would suggest you have a look through and update it.. also, when you're ready, please include your name.. thanks, your piece has winning potential like others.. we don;t want to lose big points... so delighted for you! :) huggs
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 7/15/2011 5:29:00 AM
Hi Nette, thank you for your kind comment on my poem Spiritual Feelings. Also correcting my spelling and other mistakes i made that would be points deductable, which i wasn`t aware of. I was over the moon with your choice of subjects for your contest category.. Thanks again .. Bless up . Paul.
Date: 7/14/2011 3:43:00 PM
Interesting point making write, very powerful too. good on ya mate, Don
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:40:00 PM
this was a powerful write nicely done. cory
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