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Spirits

Gin My old familiar Friend Where have You been This room is Getting smaller and Its closing in On my darkest Fears Whiskey You’ve all but Left me when we Used to drink together so Frequently Now my thoughts Are drinking Me, simply Feeding off my Self-pity Pinnacle Its been long Since we’ve spent A night alone And this heart Grows cynical Finding it impossible To atone for These slithering Sins Drink I’ve all but Drowned my Sorrows I only Wish I could Borrow your strength Once more As I step out this life And drink once More

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Date: 7/2/2015 12:25:00 PM
Izaak, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/2/2015 12:00:00 PM
Izaak, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/2/2015 11:19:00 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup, Izaak :) - Thank you for your first poem :) - I'll be glad to read more from you in the future :) - I wish you good luck with your poems and comments - // Anne-Lise :)
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