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Spirited Procession

fog's fingertips creep moon silently cackles, grins... soft glow on blackness twisted trees moan, creak pumpkins' wrinkles choke, dig deep... lit up distortions shuffling, shifting steps spirited procession, screams... smiles flash, trick or treat! *** Sept. 9 2010 for Linda-Marie's Halloween haiku contest :)

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De R

Date: 9/21/2011 1:16:00 PM

Nice that you used alliteration in these haiku(s). It sure gives an interesting touch along with the wonderful imagery brought up by your play of words. Great haiku trio! Hugs, Emilia

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/12/2010 5:53:00 AM

congratulations on a very fine poem win, nikko!

John Taylor

Date: 9/11/2010 1:44:00 PM

Congrats! - Well deserved.

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/11/2010 10:09:00 AM

congrats on your win with this spooky entry

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/11/2010 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win in Linda's Contest Nikko, hope your Saturday's been a brilliant one :)

John Freeman

Date: 9/11/2010 12:14:00 AM

Congratulations Nikko on your fourth place! Agape, Moses

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/10/2010 11:51:00 PM

this is really good, congrats. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2010 10:51:00 PM

AWesome win, Nikko and much deserved. LUv, Andrea

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/10/2010 8:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win in the contest. Charles

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/10/2010 6:58:00 PM

Congratulations on the win for this wonderful haiku, nikko

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2010 5:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Nikko. Love Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/10/2010 2:30:00 PM

Scary and enjoyable !! Congratulations, Nikko...delightful !!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/10/2010 2:10:00 PM

Nikko, Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/10/2010 1:41:00 PM

Congrats Nikko on your success in my Halloween Haiku contest... an awesome entry full of spooky lines and Halloween flavor.. thankx for supporting luv..

Tei Mickey

Date: 9/10/2010 9:51:00 AM

Great Haikus! thanks for helping me with my punctuation, and spelling! if you read my poem 'Myself' you'll see terrible speller as one of the phrases describing me. :P thanks for a great read! ---Tei

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/10/2010 3:49:00 AM

Hi Nikko, Naging masaya basahin ang iyong Haikus at dakilang akrostik masyadong! Haven't been on Soup for a while but will post another Tanka this early afternoon. Best of luck for Linda-Marie's contest!...Ingat! :) Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2010 11:43:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Nikko. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/9/2010 7:27:00 AM

Wow! Terrific haiku series that brings out the "spirits" of Halloween in full force. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/9/2010 1:48:00 AM

This is great!..I loved it ..Take care~Deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2010 7:13:00 PM

Nikko, your trio of haiku here is outstanding . some of the best for Linda's contest. This better be right up in the top three! Luv, Andrea PS that first one is OUT OF SIGHT for imagery.

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/8/2010 6:41:00 PM

Thanks for the spot on my misspell =) in Stupor. Best take on the contest so far that I've read. Good luck, Nikko.

John Taylor

Date: 9/8/2010 6:32:00 PM

I think you did a great job with the imagery of a Halloween night. I really felt like I was there while reading this. (And as a reader, the haiku is my least favorite form of poetry) Good luck in the contest.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/8/2010 5:53:00 PM

Nice haikus with alliteration, good luck in the contest, Nikko

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/8/2010 3:13:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with well deserving write..Reads like a winners' circle win to me..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and taking the time to read what I had to say...Ayeyarwady River flows north to south through Burma(Myanmar)..It is also called "The Road To Mandalay"..Sara

Thvia Shetley

Date: 9/8/2010 2:54:00 PM

Love it! I have never experimented with haiku, looks like it could be fun... thank you for your thoughtful comments on my poetry!