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Spirit Walk

I am asleep I dream I am flying I am the sky outside myself above streets and buildings Time and place do not exist I am moonlight staring back at the sun Updrafts of light echoes off distant plateaus above the blue earth into the sparkling void Walking up the stars through the nine heavens and all nine earths I am me set free so astally in a sea of ecstasy....

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/12/2013 4:07:00 PM

Hola Ken; Como estas? I see that you are alright on a beautiful trip. Beautiful poem.... Lucilla

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/12/2013 4:14:00 PM

Buen dia Lucilla, Muy bien gracias! gracias por leer!! Respecto, Ken

Donna Jones

Date: 10/12/2013 7:36:00 AM

Hey Ken....really enjoyed this....takes to a feeling where my grandpa used to take me telling me stories about our Cherokee ancestors...

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/12/2013 9:45:00 AM

Hi Donna, Thanks for the wonderful comment. Ken

Jesse James Forster

Date: 10/8/2013 12:51:00 AM

Hey Ken good to see you here too my friend. I didnt realize how many of well I guess I were here and as I have already said this is an excellent write that stimulates imagination. Always a pleasure...Jesse

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/8/2013 6:05:00 AM

Hi Jesse, Thanks buddy and good to see you here.. Ken

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/7/2013 2:42:00 PM

I have had that dream where I was flying, high amongst the clouds and the stars. Too bad though, that I had to wake up and realize that it was not reality. This poem was a very relaxing and calming one to read. Wonderful work, Ken!...Thank you very much for the nice comments!

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/7/2013 2:50:00 PM

Hi Kelly, Thank you for the wonderful visit and compliment.. Ken

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2013 11:23:00 AM

What a beautiful and exciting dream..I always wonder what it would like to float upon a cloud..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara

Ken Carroll
Date: 10/7/2013 11:39:00 AM

Hi Sara, Thanks for your comments and visit as well.. Ken