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Spirit of the Wind

Forever changing the s p i r i t of the wind swishing swirling churning Grasping onto l o s t s o u l s stealing hopes and dreams T h r a s h i n g like a wounded animal

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Sanket Jain

Date: 9/3/2017 8:01:00 PM

Waiting for part 2. I thoroughly enjoyed your creative verse. New way of expressing excellent ideas by a verse. Highly creative verse.Start & end match greatly. Of course, second part may have something more for me. Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style.

Sanket Jain

Date: 9/3/2017 7:57:00 PM

Rhetorical devices really add beauty to the poem. Arrangement of words too is special. Fine words at fine position with fine devices. Great work! Words are few to show your talent. Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style. Your view is encouragement for me & Pari Style.