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Spirit of a Champion

gaping mouth kiss to canvass on my jugular death’s caress my spirit’s quenched combust a champion in defeat’s bust eyes swollen shut, “and he’s out!” down for the count on my gut prey food to a superior predator beneath the boot of my victor ear compelled to my new level to the maniacal laughter of the devil gasping bloodied snot for breath choking on own uprooted teeth flashing a mockery of embarrassment cameras capture my lowest moment in my fading hour...falling apart in living colour...creating art twelve rounds in life’s gruelling bout going toe to toe with an unfair lout to be counted out of existence I will accept with reluctance “one, two,” referee takes a closer look eight seconds to be written out of the history books “...three, four, five, six, seven...” don't hesitate ...and I’m up at the count of eight! SPIRIT OF A CHAMPION Thabang Jan Ngoma 22-07-2015 For Contest Name: Get Low Sponsor: Casarah Nance

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Date: 7/24/2015 3:25:00 PM
THABANG, Congrats in Casarah's getting low contest. Love **SKAT**
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/31/2015 2:49:00 PM
Dankie baie Skatie...much love as always...Tbang
Date: 7/24/2015 1:33:00 AM
Well done, Thabang, a great take on the theme. Congrats, Viv
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/24/2015 3:24:00 AM
Hi Viv...thank you so much and congrats on your awesome wining narrative. I loved the analogy used of the trains representing different adverseties in your life (:heers, Tbang
Date: 7/24/2015 12:56:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Thabang! Great work!
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/24/2015 3:26:00 AM
Hi Dr. Upma...thank you very much - appreciated (:heers, Tbang
Date: 7/23/2015 7:42:00 PM
Thabang, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/23/2015 8:27:00 PM
Hi Alexis...thank you so much. I love your work and I read your poem earlier...Touching, chilling and reassuring (:heers, Tbang
Date: 7/23/2015 6:45:00 PM
I thought this was amazing, and if you followed the title of Get low, it would have been in the top ten, I had to show everyone what a good write this was though, thank you very much for entering!
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/23/2015 8:22:00 PM
Hi Casarah...appreciate you warranting the HM inspite of me failing to comply fully with the rules of the contest...the contest tested me and I can tell, from the other winners, that they had to dig deep as well...love your contests (:heers, Tbang
Date: 7/23/2015 3:33:00 PM
A knockout of a write - congrats on your win Thabang:-) hugs Jan xx
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/23/2015 4:21:00 PM
Hi Jan...thanks. How close have we all come to being written off...?I've read your winning write and its so poignant and compelling...(:heers, Tbang

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