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Spirit in the sky

                                         patchwork clouds of gold

                                       calm waters reflect Heaven

                                          coastal rocks watching

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  1. Date: 5/27/2010 9:58:00 PM
    this is such a comforting haiku, Mitch :) --I especially loved your first line, and together with the other 2 lines, it really paints a wonderful picture :) thank you as well for your comments :)

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 5:39:00 PM
    i love the title. and what a wondeful poem. yes, i can the see the amazing imagery of that golden spirit soaring through the sky. -always

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 9:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win...Enjoyed..very nice...Marty

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 9:06:00 PM
    Hello, my friend! I noticed this poem was listed in the top 100 poems of the past two weeks (along with several others of yours). Yeah! I like this description of the clouds as "patchwork clouds".

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 9:01:00 AM
    Congrats, Bro! Thanks for your comments!..Very nice Haiku!...Jimmy

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 4:56:00 PM
    thanks congrats on win hope you have more

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 11:49:00 AM
    very nice congrats on your win faleshia

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 4:28:00 AM
    Great write in this one...I see from someone's write that you won...So congratulations....It is amazing the perspectives that different ones have on these...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my writes..Sara

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 2:57:00 AM
    Excellent haiku, Mitch! No wonder why it's a winner! Belated congratulations! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 10:32:00 PM
    Hey, I see you placed with it too. I wanted to include the rocks myself. You got it in well. Congratulations, Mitch. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 10:02:00 PM
    Congrat.,..a well deserved win..awesome,I love the patchwork clouds of gold.....Charma

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 7:38:00 PM
    Congrats Mitch on your 1st place win in Raul's contest with this superb write for the photo Vanilla Sky... awesome victory my friend..luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 7:10:00 PM
    very good Mitch, I'm glad you won with it. Charles

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 5:33:00 PM
    Nice work...#1 !!! Hooray for you Mitch!! Wishing you a vanilla sky evening!! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 4:31:00 PM
    Yeah, I agree with how Raul chose this Haiku for the winner. Congratulations with this great poem! Chris.

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 4:24:00 PM
    Great one! Congrats!

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 4:13:00 PM
    Mitch, congratulations on winning my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 3:19:00 PM
    Awesome! Mitch. Well written Haiku. Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 2:21:00 PM
    excellent write sounds interesting to me, enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 12:12:00 PM
    very nice if for contest good luck hope you are having a great weekend faleshia