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Spirit Grows In the Right Environment

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In trickling branch, I wade Then the creek at the path's end drew my spirit in I stayed, played Now the mill pond Its deep, cool waters refreshin' I bond But then Sea's moves meshin' Yen In trickling branch, I wade Its deep, cool waters refreshin' Yen

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Howard Kerr

Date: 11/26/2023 8:21:00 PM

Sarah, I’m so grateful for your review of Earthbound Autumn Pageant and your detailed insights on it. Spirit Grows is a stunning piece that oozes creativity and a precise depiction of various environments. Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/27/2023 5:58:00 AM

Why, thank you, Howard. I appreciate the high praise. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/26/2023 6:32:00 AM

A beauty! Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/26/2023 9:22:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate all the visits and taking time to comment on my work. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/24/2023 11:16:00 AM

Back with hearty congratulations on your win Sara, with this lovely poem

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/24/2023 2:06:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad for going to the extra effort to do that. Sara K

Canny Amah

Date: 11/21/2023 8:19:00 PM

... a sizzling method for a tantalizing idea!!! Cheers!!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/22/2023 4:49:00 AM

Thank you, Canny. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2023 10:08:00 PM

Such unusual style, Sara. It reminds me a bit of haiku

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/21/2023 4:17:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Yeah, somewhat like a haiku. Thanks for dropping by ...Sara K

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/20/2023 1:19:00 PM

I love this beauty, Sara, and that Rumi, ahh, a sweet point, my friend. Aloha, William

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2023 1:33:00 PM

Why, thank you, William. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Judy Ball

Date: 11/20/2023 10:24:00 AM

Beautiful Sara. This makes me think of my youth and the ties I spent at the beach, just me, my dogs and the gulls.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2023 10:41:00 AM

Ahhh, Judy!! That must have been awesome playing on the beach with the dogs and seeing the gulls. Your visit has added a new dimension. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 11/20/2023 9:17:00 AM

Sara, A peerless environment poem of the highest quality. Thanks for your soup mail on Wild Green Moss Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2023 10:40:00 AM

Thank you, Howard. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 11/20/2023 8:41:00 AM

Some of my best childhood memories are playing in the creek by my home. Nice poem Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2023 10:39:00 AM

Why, thank you, Tom. I am glad you have happy memories from your childhood. I appreciate your kind review. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/20/2023 3:29:00 AM

A lovely poem that inspires calmness. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2023 3:58:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/19/2023 4:34:00 PM

I do love the feeling you created with your words, Ms. Sara. I felt calm as I read your poem. I appreciate the Rumi quote. He's been one of my favorite poets for many years now. I also liked the use of the word "Yen." It says so much! Have a splendid Thanksgiving, hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2023 3:58:00 AM

Our daughter has invited us to come eat Thanksgiving dinner with them. So I know we will enjoy the time spent with them. I am glad you liked the poem. Sara K

Deb M

Date: 11/19/2023 3:08:00 PM

Very lovely Sara…..your words have such a calming effect! Debx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2023 3:56:00 AM

Deb, it is nice to know that my writing has the calming effect. Thanks for your kind review of my work. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/19/2023 1:31:00 PM

Then the creek at the path's end drew my spirit in I stayed, played---beautifully reminiscing in nature's delight, Sara. I like your Rumi quote.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2023 3:56:00 AM

Yes, Vijay. It has been quite a while since the branch, creek or ocean has been part of my life. LOL..I am glad you liked Rumi's voice. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/19/2023 1:20:00 PM

Wonderful poem Sara. Your imagery is shining through all lines, and the way you crafted them along with the rhyme is just stunning.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2023 3:54:00 AM

Your visits always are encouraging, Lasaad. Sometimes rhyme is not so easy and this was one of them. Sara K

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 11/19/2023 1:17:00 PM

A beautiful poem. Well done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2023 3:53:00 AM

Thank you, Jeanette. I appreciate your visit and comments. Sara K