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Spinning

Life is a whirlwind spinning out of control. It's hard to keep up, and stress takes it's toll It's like a spiral effect, when ourselves we neglect. When we injure our soul it leaves a big hole. It's hard to repair and not taking care, will leave you lonely It will be just you only.

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Date: 4/22/2014 4:55:00 PM
I can see a vortex here...and if we are not careful we could easily be swallowed in it! well written Karen; enjoyed. // paul
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Karen Murphy
Date: 4/22/2014 5:07:00 PM
Thank you Paul!! Spinning was an olddddddd poem and didn't even have a title. And last night when I posted it The title came to me.

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