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Spinning

spinning twirling round and round make me dizzy steal away my screams take the pain give me laughter stop the memories over and over they pour begging wishing for release let me go give it back that time that pure innocence he gave me so much changed me greatly the world goes on spinning twirling round and round

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Date: 2/18/2010 12:52:00 PM
I got dizzy!
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Date: 2/18/2010 4:06:00 AM
very deep, well written, welcome to poetry soup, hope you have an ever flowing pen, and the inspiration to match.
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Date: 2/18/2010 3:56:00 AM
Interesting poem - Thanks for sharing
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