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Spilled Coffee

The coffee spilled as she went out the door Now brown stains 'pon the carpet on the floor It saturated her dictionary Her poetry notebook~both necessary A little mess that needs to be cleaned now What would happen if today out she did bow Entered into another worldly realm As she so ponders being overwhelmed Which is more important her writings dear Or worn carpet 'pon the floor tattered severe Finis'..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/13/2013 9:44:00 AM
Wow great piece. Love it. :)
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Date: 6/22/2013 9:49:00 AM
Yes...balancing the importance of daily tasks and creativity...your poem ponders the situation in a beautifully crafted way. Enjoyed reading!
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Date: 6/19/2013 10:19:00 AM
extremely poetic, Sara, just love this....
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Date: 6/19/2013 9:02:00 AM
Good rhymes, good finish!
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Date: 6/19/2013 2:45:00 AM
great work. comment on my poems
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Date: 6/18/2013 4:30:00 PM
what a conundrum which to save definitely the notebook for me lol this is super Sara adding to favs Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/18/2013 4:14:00 PM
Hello Sara: Great poem!!! Been there and done that, lol!!! Have a great day.
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Date: 6/18/2013 12:18:00 PM
What a quandary,sara... love how you took this theme with words that float and disarm.. i'll save the noteboook anytime.. wondeful...:) huggs and more prayers..:)
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Date: 6/18/2013 11:52:00 AM
- Much mess with coffee spills ... - A nice poem Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/17/2013 12:50:00 PM
you fired my interest, sara... finely written as i look forward to how this will finally go.. more prayers for you and the famliy!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/17/2013 10:55:00 AM
It has been a delight to read what you have written so far! I am intrigued as to how this poem will finish! This is a wonderful beginning, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/17/2013 10:39:00 AM
I do not know how you will finish this little poem, already dirtened by coffee, a stain quite difficult to remove, unless your imagination transforms this stain into some wonderful thought! I am expecting anxiously.
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