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Spider Plant Verse 3

Row of bamboo at lake’s edge. Lattice-laced curtains. NB: Inspired by Suzanne Delaney’s contest and subsequent blog (3-29-2023). This form arose from the oral tradition of “call and response.” In the rhythm of their work and perhaps in the spirit of a game or to relieve boredom, people would call out to each other. The first speaker called out a line that contained an image. A second speaker replied using a second image. This second image was meant to function as an elaboration or metaphor of the first. No titles, no particular rhyme or syllabic scheme.

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Date: 4/11/2023 4:02:00 PM
I like the peaceful imagery Pangie
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/11/2023 4:08:00 PM
Thanks dear friend! :)
Date: 4/7/2023 7:15:00 AM
Wonderful, you rock, Linda:)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/7/2023 7:43:00 AM
LOL. I get it. Thanks Jo! :)
Date: 4/5/2023 2:31:00 PM
This is a good metaphor. I like this one, Alice.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/5/2023 2:43:00 PM
I appreciate your comments Daniel. I'm glad you like it:)

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