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Spider Haiku

tiny spider web catches this fallen blossom wrong prey to pounce on.

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Carol Breslin

Date: 10/7/2015 8:46:00 AM

Great poem!!! I want to let you know that I shared your spider haiku on a Wordpress blog. You can see it here: https://aloadabobbins.wordpress.com/2015/10/07/webs/comment-page-1/#comment-530

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2014 10:45:00 AM

Hi Suzanne, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA

Daver Austin

Date: 8/18/2014 12:01:00 PM

Sensitive. I love Haiku. Congrats on the selection. daver

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/18/2014 6:57:00 PM

Thanks for reading, Daver: I really did witness this funny little scene . Suz

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/10/2014 5:49:00 PM

poor spider no food today. Great haiku great win :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/18/2014 6:59:00 PM

Thanks Casara: I do appreciate your comments. SuZ

Paul Callus

Date: 8/8/2014 2:50:00 PM

Congratulations, Suzanne! I'm fascinated by spiders, and yours is a typical garden spider; enjoyed! // paul

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/9/2014 12:03:00 PM

Hi Paul: I am a great spider watcher myself. I so appreciate your kind comments, If you type Spiders into the search here it brings up a great selection, Many thanks

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2014 2:25:00 PM

this is delightful, suzanne.. huge congrats!.. huggs

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/9/2014 3:24:00 PM

Thanks Nette: So good of you to visit me.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:42:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/9/2014 3:25:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise: Always a treasure to see you.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 1:09:00 AM

Wonderful write, Suzanne. congrats on the win.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/9/2014 3:26:00 PM

Many Thanks Dr, Ram I was thrilled to be chosen a winner.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 12:01:00 AM

Nice one, Suz. It's so cool to see where people go with their AHA moments. Congrats.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/9/2014 3:27:00 PM

Hi Andrea: I appreciate you for stopping by. I hope to go read and comment on the other winners soon,

Kash Poet

Date: 6/29/2013 2:58:00 PM

Good one .I love haiku.here is one by me-- a big catch--/in the spider's web/the full moon~

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/9/2014 3:28:00 PM

Nice Haiku Kash; a perfet aha moment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2013 8:28:00 PM

I do not like spiders, but i really like your haiku. the last one was my favorite. xox~ Linda

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/6/2013 7:48:00 PM

Dear Suzanne, these are great Haiku First ones I have read by YOU. You had to see the Spider grab the blossom. I saw a spider go after a Pine needle. He tore it out of the web and rewove the web in a matter of seconds. Haiku and Senryu are 2 of my favourite forms.Superb Pen. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

James Fraser

Date: 4/5/2013 5:32:00 PM

The latter line cements this series Suzanne. Their paths never deviate as they know exactly where they are stranded, by that I mean attached in the awaiting. Nice write, have a lovely weekend, James :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/4/2013 7:23:00 PM

Love the haiku Suzy ;} I have one called haiku six. Very sad about JonBenet, thank you for reading my words ;}

Kash Poet

Date: 3/29/2013 11:50:00 AM

Very nice haiku by you Suz.Enjoyed the read.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2013 11:10:00 PM

these are so interesting, Suz. I don't see you do haiku too often. the first one is humorous to me and the second one has a great image!!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/29/2013 11:31:00 AM

Hi Andrea: Lovely to see you. I did these for a oriental stamp Art Kimono series and I was hooked. The first one was a real scene I saw once and it did make me chucle to see the spider run out only to find a blossom. Hugs, SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2013 4:48:00 PM

Great work..Enjoyed reading your creativity this eve..Thanks for stopping by..I hope that your niece enjoys the poem..Sara

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/28/2013 8:39:00 PM

Thanks for visiting Sara, I am enjoying getting to know new poetry friends. My niece is in Australia so with your permission I can send the Nursery Rhyme by email to her Mum, for her to read it to her. Hugs, SuZ