Spider

a need to feed spider like, upon a serving mate, the price is death, the deadly bite, some food upon your plate, the cost of sweet delight, not sex, not worth the fate Don...

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/3/2012 1:23:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Yes, the black widow spider over here gets it name from killing the male with which it mates..This meal ensures healthy babies I guess..Interesting work for sure..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate your review..Sara

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/3/2012 9:50:00 AM

well done! very nice...

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 10/3/2012 6:58:00 AM

Oh nice Don!..u got me hooked reading this one - Shaz

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/3/2012 6:42:00 AM

No, No, that is not worth the fate my friend! I've heard of those spider like women out there! I would never go into that world for anything, not to that deadly fate, that deadly bite is not for me Don! I'm sure you're not looking for that either! What an intriguing poem, a very special message within your write my friend! I just love this piece, Great Work!!