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Spicy Diet

The Tex-Mex festival was bountiful But it scratched my innards, much like steel wool When the cramps began Oh, how fast I ran My impersonation of Old Faithful

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/7/2014 4:48:00 PM

I've had the revenge of the hoilday s and spent many hours in the rest rooms myself, got i could not eat soild food for a while after that but man my stomach hurt for awhile after that. cheri

Kash Poet

Date: 11/15/2013 7:28:00 PM

Enjoyed again this funny poem Carolyn!Post a new poem.Miss ya.

Cherie Durbin

Date: 11/2/2013 7:03:00 AM

terribly funny, Carolyn ;)

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/6/2013 4:44:00 PM

Well you describe the pityable human condition well here Carolyn, i often marvel at the hope inspiration and helplessness of people in general, and the ability of them to re-invigorate themselves under uncomfortable circumstances take care, Joe..)

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 8/23/2013 3:27:00 AM

See how they ran! See how they ran...

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 8/7/2013 12:17:00 AM

Smiles, what a picture I've stumbled on for breakfast! Rich pickings a little too hot to handle it seems! Great write but sorry if true of your discomfort!

Kathryn Collins

Date: 7/28/2013 7:45:00 AM

Dear Carolyn - Make me laugh out loud, will you. Your impersonation of Old Faithful is priceless. love, Kathy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2013 7:18:00 AM

Spicy food can be upseting but sometimes good..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sar

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/14/2013 11:27:00 PM

I sampled some of Chipotle's cooking, and I had to be honest to tell them I didn't care for it. Honesty does not always pay because they turned me down for a job there.

Russell Smith

Date: 7/10/2013 1:34:00 AM

Wonderful, thanks for making me smile once again. Russell

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/30/2013 1:30:00 PM

Smilin! Very much filled with high spirits! Nice....jimmy

Kash Poet

Date: 6/25/2013 11:51:00 AM

Haha..enjoyed this Limerick very much Carolyn.I am very glad to read a new poem of you.

Kash Poet

Date: 6/25/2013 11:49:00 AM

Yess!A new poem from you Carolyn!

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 6/23/2013 1:56:00 AM

awesome! wonderful! a great write!

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/22/2013 10:05:00 PM

It is soooooo nice to see you here again my friend, you have written another gem of a write! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/22/2013 9:58:00 PM

Wow... I had a similar experience lately and wrote poem about it (didn't post it). Your descriptions fit and love the wit :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/22/2013 7:40:00 PM

'So glad to see your name..and poem. soup mail..BG