Special

SPECIAL No matter da body Be it common unusual or beautiful Many up close say he special Oh he selfish proud crude mean even crimnal but God bless He be special Maybe it be da way he smile Or da way he frown and plead When day put him in jail – he so sorry he will change his style Or maybe it be da way he make up After he beat up his wife Oh he be on heroin but He will share Nothin bad nobody say mean crap Dat sucker can rap Dave Austin

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Joe Maverick

Date: 7/23/2017 4:44:00 PM

A good piece on the frailty's inherent in mankind Daver, well thought and executed, with a strong aura of the true to life in its lines, well done as always.'

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/24/2017 5:17:00 PM

That vernacular thing - you got it down, Holmes! Well done, Daver. : )

Paul Callus

Date: 3/13/2017 9:47:00 AM

Full marks for this serious yet witty poem, Dave. We are often too quick to defend our heroes even though deep down they're not worth it! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2017 5:28:00 PM

haha, I don't know, I just found this one very humorous and the language you used. I like this very much,DAver.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/7/2017 5:09:00 PM

What Carolyn and Carol said. This is very creative. A Fav!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2017 1:42:00 PM

Daver, you have captured the rhythm (and grammar) of rap perfectly. It's almost like - so what if he beats his wife and poisons his body with heron. He can rap! Nice twist of humor here, my friend. I'm in football withdrawal. Can't wait for fall! Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin
Date: 3/6/2017 1:47:00 PM

Thanks for the visit, and hooray for football. Love, Dave

Carol B.

Date: 3/5/2017 11:28:00 AM

Wow! Yes seems they do get away with a lot. I absolutely love how you wrote this brilliant piece!!! A definite fav.

Daver Austin
Date: 3/6/2017 1:50:00 PM

Thanks for the visit. Love, daver.