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Spear of Morn

Like spears of light such bright bolts born; the buds of daffodils are formed Within a fine green glade of shafts, the buds of Marches blooms do blast Removing gloom of browns, grays, obliterating dreary days, most fair salute, glorious dawn; the day the daffys buds adorn.

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/28/2010 10:05:00 AM

enjoyed reading

Matthew Brackley

Date: 4/5/2009 7:36:00 PM

lovely! the whole series of the archer is on the site.check in my poems.there is an index.you may find it interesting.of eagle feather and of star.matt

Aaron Crow

Date: 3/31/2009 6:36:00 AM

Your poem has excellent consonance, and I really like the insight. Good pen!

Kevin Robinson

Date: 3/30/2009 2:51:00 PM

Your quatrain is a nice read. I like the way the words connect in your poem.

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 3/30/2009 8:21:00 AM

Gotta love those heralds of spring.... !! :) Wonderful Deborah

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/26/2009 8:28:00 AM

Dear Light & LOVE Deborah"obliterating dreary days" Please send some of this Spring up here in Vermont YOU have to shovel snow first Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG

Denis Joe

Date: 3/26/2009 3:45:00 AM

There is a wonderful sound to this that remains in the ears a long while after reading it. I find that to be your strength in you poetry; the alliteration that you use, not simply to create a rhyming structure but to maintain a musical one. A great poem.

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/25/2009 5:59:00 PM

spring has sprung. love john

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/25/2009 5:13:00 PM

lovely and sweet,i love daffodils and carnations too,removing gloom of browns ,grays,yeah we dont need dull days just fine greenery,:-)charma

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/25/2009 1:28:00 PM

Bringing Spring to glorious life here. Imagery of the beauty of the season so well expressed. Goodbye Winter. Beautiful, pretty to read. Love, Shar

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/25/2009 9:24:00 AM

Such beautiful warm images here...Ah yes the beauty of spring where the buds of many flowers start to bloom and blossom so gloriously..Great write, GB Tyesha

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/25/2009 7:43:00 AM

simply beautiful! Jim

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/25/2009 7:43:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, my dear and talented friend! :) Ahh Spring! And so dreams are born!!! Message recieved! il attend to later! Excellent imagery, Deb! I'll never look at daffodils the same way again. Thank you! Love ya!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/25/2009 7:42:00 AM

The daffys that run up and down our driveway are already about spent, ....our early bloom almost done. Soon there will only be the spears of the morn! Nice one....now I must look for the roses to bloom! ~ Carrie

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/25/2009 7:23:00 AM

The gardener of hope abroad again, and I love the sweet therapy of her words. Nothing matches the juice of your flow ... another absolute beauty! love, L'nass