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Sparrows

sparrows pause in spring walden pond on cabin's peak - no epiphany

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/17/2014 9:15:00 PM
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Hopefully, spring will be arriving soon. But, for those of us who live up north, it felt like winter had returned these last few days. A great haiku, Dave! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you very much for the kind comments on my poem! :)
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 3/16/2014 5:00:00 AM
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Wonderful poem penned well and congrats on the win, dave
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Skat A
Date: 3/16/2014 4:17:00 AM
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Hi Dave:) Awesome win.... Take care Love *Skat
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Date: 3/16/2014 4:00:00 AM
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Dave, Congratulations! Thank you for the support ~LINDA~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/18/2014 10:07:00 PM
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I like that cool final line!!
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David Mohn
Date: 2/19/2014 7:45:00 AM
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Thanks Andrea :)
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Robert Pettit
Date: 2/18/2014 7:18:00 PM
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You made good use out of only seventeen syllables here.
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David Mohn
Date: 2/18/2014 7:41:00 PM
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Thanks robert - By the way, nice job on "Miss Simara" - I got spammed by her also :)

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