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Below is the poem entitled Sparrows which was written by poet david mohn. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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sparrows pause in spring
walden pond on cabin's peak -
no epiphany

Copyright © david mohn

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  1. Date: 3/17/2014 9:15:00 PM
    Hopefully, spring will be arriving soon. But, for those of us who live up north, it felt like winter had returned these last few days. A great haiku, Dave! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you very much for the kind comments on my poem! :)

  1. Date: 3/16/2014 5:00:00 AM
    Wonderful poem penned well and congrats on the win, dave

  1. Date: 3/16/2014 4:17:00 AM
    Hi Dave:) Awesome win.... Take care Love *Skat

  1. Date: 3/16/2014 4:00:00 AM
    Dave, Congratulations! Thank you for the support ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 2/18/2014 10:07:00 PM
    I like that cool final line!!

    mohn Avatar david mohn
    Date: 2/19/2014 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea :)
  1. Date: 2/18/2014 7:18:00 PM
    You made good use out of only seventeen syllables here.

    mohn Avatar david mohn
    Date: 2/18/2014 7:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks robert - By the way, nice job on "Miss Simara" - I got spammed by her also :)