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Sparkling Devotion

When sky’s curtains drape the clouds A mind reels from bruises of the day, Listening in stillness to the rhythm of breath And in this space, his eyes whisper Of moonlight’s rock-a- bye, swaying the gait, Waiting for the promised lull of the wind Softly pinching a gaze upon light’s pause-- And finding his woman tumble in sighs Trickling, gushing into a weary haze. Stars, fiddling serenades of robins’ tweet, Absorb tired thoughts to drift like a song , As fragrant air from of window weaves a hum Blending with the melody of celestial sparks. Then, like an open flight,her heart inclines To slide on rails cuddled by gasps of demise--- While his love-light echoes:” Hush, my dear Sleep tight as lashes drop; Dream with me, Play our song to the tune of warm chorus.” And the world passes by in a quiet tunnel, Where morn holds starlight's devoted keep. Contest: Laura Loo's Any HM Ever Reposted 1/22/2017 ---------------------- Originally written for: How To Make The Stars Hush Contest Dated 3/7/2015

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Date: 1/23/2017 1:36:00 PM
You are making me wish I had someone Nette. You describe so well the intimacy of a loving relationship. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/23/2017 9:31:00 AM
Lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/23/2017 4:34:00 AM
Really good, Nette:) enjoyed much, congratulations:)
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Date: 1/22/2017 5:59:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette, congratulations on your win Hugs
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Date: 1/22/2017 4:50:00 PM
just stunning Nette! I love the flow you always carry in your verses...so soothing and elegant...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 3/15/2015 2:14:00 PM
Nice devotion sparkling in life, wonderfully expressed. Congrats a lot. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:31:00 AM
Very expressive Nette! Congrats on fine win!
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Date: 3/8/2015 7:41:00 PM
superb Nette love shines out of this excellent pen hugs 7
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Date: 3/8/2015 12:36:00 PM
Your words speak in a sweet voice and with gentle and pleasurable reverberations. Adoration mixed with tranquillity has been captured by your artistic pen and held motionless on the page. Well done. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/8/2015 12:29:00 PM
Such amazing imagery, Nette. Breathtaking...Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/8/2015 11:36:00 AM
Nett nett...no words....elegant....doesn't come close...I enjoy always your talent
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Date: 3/8/2015 9:57:00 AM
- Must be read in peace and quiet ..... a beauty to the contest - Good luck dear Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/8/2015 9:45:00 AM
Husssh.. this is absolutely your greatest piece ,nette !!! .. :')
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Date: 3/8/2015 4:17:00 AM
Excellent. Very beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 3/7/2015 11:44:00 PM
"Where dusk meets starlights devoted keep"...Very nice, Nette, very nice indeed! :) john.
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Date: 3/7/2015 9:52:00 PM
I can see where a conversation with you on a moonlit night would need no words, just the space between to bridge the distance from eyes to heart wrapped in a silent world where the breath is taken away....my first thought after reading this poem..
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Date: 3/7/2015 5:53:00 PM
Reads like a winner..So many romantic works in the last week..Valentine's Day must have rubbed off and stayed around on the poets here..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2015 4:37:00 PM
Your imagery took my breath away Nette - from the first to last line - simply beautiful - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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