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Riddled face, weary under clouds quite frail, night of hope screeches of meal to eat. A boy cups his hands again for spare change plucking a tin can on lanes primed for the rich. Colder than ice of night like soiled paper bag he approaches a woman of leisure with a smile; bypassed and judged as nameless face, a plague while his lips hang on a sigh…coins, coins. Though disgruntled, the matron feels a hard tug A shrewd merchant blinded by earthly whims; hoarding diamonds and favors as life’s treasures while he, an innocent waif mirrors her empty needs. For she lives in a mansion filled with poverty where frozen rooms and silverware feed on hunger, as soul barren cannot hide the real misery craving for pauper’s wealth of faith; she is the beggar. Dr. Ram Mehta's Measure For Measure by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/16/2014 7:44:00 PM
I have seen these empty faces, and tins, and hearts. I have also felt a chill run through me as i read this poem. Great Job. A poignant, thought provoking write. Thank You. John
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Date: 6/16/2014 6:29:00 PM
Just thought I would let you know, came back to read this a few times, that's how much I liked this one!!
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Date: 6/16/2014 10:47:00 AM
Hi Nette, congratulations on a well-deserved win! I enjoyed this very deep and inspirational write. Well done!
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Date: 6/16/2014 6:50:00 AM
Congrats, Nette on a fine win... I truly love, love love this poem!!...Those who seem to have the most, sometimes have nothing of true value.. Hugs.. Arlene..
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Date: 6/16/2014 6:31:00 AM
Beautiful write nette, pauper's wealth of faith and mansion filled with poverty. Congrats on fine win. Mohan
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Date: 6/16/2014 5:57:00 AM
Thanks for participation in the contest and congrats on the win, nette
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Date: 6/15/2014 10:16:00 AM
Very deep and profound! "An innocent waif mirrors her empty needs." I wonder if the waif is thinking as he looks at her...There but for the grace of God, go I.
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Date: 6/7/2014 1:32:00 PM
This is so good Nette, you have penned perfectly the state of our world. One day the rich will have much to answer for. Great write my friend. Blessings Carl
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Date: 6/7/2014 6:27:00 AM
This is really really nice my friend. ...you captured the world we leave in daily! So sad but true. ..powerful write!
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Date: 6/6/2014 10:53:00 PM
This is a Wow Wow Wow, This is an excellent piece of poetry, absolutely loved this one, a fav
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Date: 6/6/2014 10:18:00 PM
WOW< Nette, This is VERY good. The depth of meaning is awesome.
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Date: 6/6/2014 9:00:00 PM
Loved it my friend. Last stanza was my favorite. Such truth exists but is not very often seen by people too busy living in their own little worlds oblivious to the glaring needs of those les fortunate. Bravo!!!!!
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