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waiting milky Way eyes riding shooting star choosing hallucinations tumbled from modicum heart scattering under light &blood red moon grasped? defying lookup remember stars are lost dreams &gazing back at you yet mourns each stolen soul crying muted again never cogitate on dawn nor sun lentigines expectations enters two shades: torment &fear black for isolation red for blood &Intoxication Written: Sep 12, 2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable. Copyright © Brian Strand

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Date: 9/13/2022 8:40:00 AM
Well written Lasaad I am impressed with this form and it is very difficult to accomplish. You have done an excellent job with it. Brian will be pleased with this great example of Poetry...
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Date: 9/13/2022 12:39:00 AM
An unusual form Lasaad, you're not afraid to leave your comfort zone when it comes to trying new forms. Best of luck in the contest, hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Date: 9/12/2022 8:29:00 PM
remember stars are lost dreams &gazing back at you..... So true! I don't know much about an open form verse. But really enjoyed your exploration into space. All the best in the contest, sweet friend
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Date: 9/12/2022 2:02:00 PM
Mindfully exploring the space--lost in stars, lost in dreams. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 9/12/2022 12:41:00 PM
A brilliant way to invent a form. Enjoyed.
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