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Space, that's occupied
Space, close proximity                            
Space, that’s open wide
Space, sometimes empty
Space, that is too limitless
Space, three dimensional 
Space, some is spacious
Space, like another interval
Space, like a trip to mars
Space, astronaut’s journey 
Space, beyond the stars 
Space, there's no gravity
Space that is treasured
Space, I dont wana share
Space, can be measured
Space, that’s Cubic Square

 Again the same pattern as stars and time poems with this again giving meaning but 
this I was trying to give a part two to time poem as I’ve mentioned in worlds apart poem time and space
Inspired- by LINDA  PD - one of your poems that was on this subject i read some time ago/ and  thank you to
other soup poets for your inspiration,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,  WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVIDSCOTT JUNE JULY 2013,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

note don’t know if last four lines make any sense  trying to do what i did with oth writes in
this pattern  keep to four verse    but also subject

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  1. Date: 11/22/2013 4:42:00 PM
    Hi David, nice seeing you online when I'm around... Following up on your inspiring poem. hahah about that space you don't like to share... Love the measurements and all in this poem... I posted a new poem,,, stop by when you have the chance... Hugs...LINDA

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 2:11:00 PM
    These verses are awesome. :D "Space- sometimes empty"....I know how that feels. Hehe Always, Laura