Space

Space A woman knows when she needs her space Now and then, she has to embrace The space where the mind has to go The place where your spirit can just flow Could be a night to put on them dancing shoes Dance the night away, let it all loose Could be a night for some peaceful escape Relax to your own personal dreamscape Whatever your space, feel the ease Good for the soul, tension release Written for Black Eyed Susan's Contest Space March 1, 2013

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/23/2018 11:46:00 PM

Space is important. Well expressed.

Skat A

Date: 5/22/2016 4:33:00 PM

DEBRA FALGOUT, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/29/2014 6:47:00 PM

Nice set of rhyming couplets. Good write.

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/22/2013 9:00:00 AM

A very nice Yin/Yang message here. A great blend of peace, yet living for the moment. Perhaps, just having peace is just that...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/5/2013 1:42:00 AM

Congrats on your win once more Debra luv ,oh just to dance away the tension xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/4/2013 9:47:00 AM

Debra, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD

Terrell Martin

Date: 3/2/2013 12:33:00 PM

REALLY nice poem...gotta admit the title caught my eye cuz I just finished watching the HBO series: From the Earth to the Moon (DVD set) & my mind is ALWAYS in space!@?! if ya know what I Mean & THANKS so much 4 yer comments on "If We Are All Just Dreaming and Life Has No Meaning" & yer awesome :) & keep up the GREAT poetry): Terry Thanks Again Terry): O & did I say PEACE?