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Below is the poem entitled Space which was written by poet DEBRA FALGOUT. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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A woman knows when she needs her space
Now and then, she has to embrace

The space where the mind has to go
The place where your spirit can just flow

Could be a night to put on them dancing shoes
Dance the night away, let it all loose

Could be a night for some peaceful escape
Relax to your own personal dreamscape

Whatever your space, feel the ease
Good for the soul, tension release

Written for Black Eyed Susan's Contest
                     March 1, 2013

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  1. Date: 1/29/2014 6:47:00 PM
    Nice set of rhyming couplets. Good write.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 9:00:00 AM
    A very nice Yin/Yang message here. A great blend of peace, yet living for the moment. Perhaps, just having peace is just that...

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:42:00 AM
    Congrats on your win once more Debra luv ,oh just to dance away the tension xx

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:47:00 AM
    Debra, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:33:00 PM
    REALLY nice poem...gotta admit the title caught my eye cuz I just finished watching the HBO series: From the Earth to the Moon (DVD set) & my mind is ALWAYS in space!@?! if ya know what I Mean & THANKS so much 4 yer comments on "If We Are All Just Dreaming and Life Has No Meaning" & yer awesome :) & keep up the GREAT poetry): Terry Thanks Again Terry): O & did I say PEACE?