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Space is a void
avoid means something
not to be trusted,
like a vacuum of nothingness
without empathy
without a soul.

Space a place not filled
like my broken heart chilled,
no one lingers in there
because there is no one to care,
when of love there is no trace
can be found in a heart or space!

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  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:23:00 PM
    I came here to congratulate you in case this was in that one contest. Wasn't it? I sure did enjoy it, but I see no congrats! How are you doing, Harry? Are you able to devote more time to your extra projects these days?

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 7:12:00 PM
    Interesting to go from outer space to inner space. If you have that void, I am so sorry. Best of luck filling it.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:15:00 AM
    Really a deep and touched piece of work, the way you describe this is really clicked with the theme :) beautiful Harry! Way to go! :D - hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 8:37:00 AM
    Best description I've ever read of that empty place that is the broken heart, very compelling. Enjoyed, John.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Is nothin just nothin or ain't nothin something and what made the nuthin and what was there before nothin was there?...awe inspiring stuff here my friend!...I am fascinated by space, the universe, the stars, you name it - Tim

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:34:00 PM
    Your writing gets better with every write, hard to improve on perfection. Well done Harry

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Very nice approach by you harry.Love this.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:16:00 AM
    Harry, I really enjoyed reading your interpretation of the theme. It's so interesting to see how people are tackling this one!! this one shows me what a deep and sensitive poet you are!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:53:00 PM
    There is love all around you Harry....Broken hearts do leave such an empty void feeling though.But I will tell you,some people do care! Carry on my friend.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:56:00 PM
    i have an empty space too but it seems to hold someone. i just keep it empty.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Creative and clever - a wonderful combination! Loved reading your poem today, Harry!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Harry; This is good. That space can one day be filled, but only God knows when. Smile - I'm watching you. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 12:30:00 PM
    Hi HArry profound piece liked it, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 12:39:00 PM
    a void means a vacuum... nature abhors a vacuum... nature encompasses love... love will fill your vacuum... Terry (moving poem)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:59:00 AM
    i love this

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:50:00 AM
    I am sure there is someone that lingers in your heart harry , how could they not xx

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Straight to my favorites Harry. This is a profound piece, tiny yet vast like the space you write about. Well done my friend.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 6:34:00 AM
    Harry, a wonderful write, I really enjoyed reading it today, constance

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 10:46:00 PM
    Good poetic descriptiveness of space.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:53:00 PM
    great write wishes