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Space is the nothingness between knowing and doing Space is there between living and dying Space hold the key between right and wrong Space is the humm between thoughts and song Space holds you back when you want to go forth Space holds the excuses from the moment of birth Without a space to move us forward to ensue No sense would be made of what we do. Dated 20/2/2013

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Date: 3/5/2013 1:44:00 AM
Hi poppet , chalk another up on your board luv and congrats on your win xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/5/2013 1:58:00 AM
Thanks Mandy, this one was a near miss though haha....Seren
Date: 3/4/2013 9:52:00 AM
Seren, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/4/2013 12:10:00 PM
Thanks PD i scraped in on that lol ....Seren
Date: 2/21/2013 10:29:00 AM
A great approach on space. Good luck in the contest. Connie
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2013 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Connie....Seren
Date: 2/21/2013 9:13:00 AM
this is good Seren, it explains the space between my ears lol xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2013 12:06:00 PM
LOL Mandy, as if .....Seren
Date: 2/21/2013 7:31:00 AM
This is such an interesting write! "Space is the hum between thoughts and song" - I LOVE that!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2013 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Heather
Date: 2/20/2013 2:56:00 PM
I really like your approach to the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/20/2013 8:39:00 PM
Thank you Sara, loved your work...Seren
Date: 2/20/2013 2:47:00 PM
Space and opportunity is life. Nice Poem Seren!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/20/2013 8:38:00 PM
Thanks Nate.......Seren
Date: 2/20/2013 2:36:00 PM
Star now this I love and more importantly I love and need my own space at times...David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/20/2013 8:37:00 PM
To be honest Dafydd I didnt think abour space til I read the contest.
Date: 2/20/2013 3:30:00 AM
Nice concept and well done..thnks for your comment on 'The Gull' keep in touch
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/20/2013 5:20:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by...Seren
Date: 2/20/2013 1:40:00 AM
This is a very awesome and delightful write my friend! I enjoyed reading this masterful poem this morning! You have enthralled me with this amazing piece Seren! Quite the beautiful write, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/20/2013 5:20:00 AM
thank you Russell
Date: 2/19/2013 11:40:00 PM
amazing thought !!! very well written poem..thank you dear sweet Seren for sharing <3 <3 <3 Sk
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/19/2013 11:58:00 PM
Thank you for commenting, wonder how many will disagree with me...Seren
Date: 2/19/2013 11:17:00 PM
That's pretty good thinking. But what I get from this is that space can be measured. And we have the ability to limit that space. If not eliminate it. This is certainly one of those poems that make me think. Thanks for sharing. Rockman
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Date: 2/19/2013 11:57:00 PM
Oops typo am blaming my ipad... * could
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/19/2013 11:56:00 PM
Hi i coud have gone on forever with my likenesses ( is there a word) lol but thought short and brief better. Thanks fr the comment...Seren

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