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7/11/12 -a collaberation with my friend who wishes to remain anonymous - ------------------------------------------------------ Separated by the emotion barrier Pierced by your absence of words Anguished by annoyance and abnormalities Calling out your name Emptiness is your reply

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Date: 8/16/2012 6:15:00 PM
Laura, I don't know how you found me, but I always like it when someone comments--Thanks I received an email and logged in to see who was the kind party. This work certainly has captured a void. Your comment on top is very fitting--it makes me laugh actually. I would say it's clever.
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:15:00 PM
I mean--you are clever!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/16/2012 6:19:00 PM
Ha ha! Thanks! :)

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