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Southern Tradition Daddy didn't look at them as they passed by August illuminating unkempt hair and worn-out hand-me-downs a woman and her four children walking in the road to avoid the sidewalk on our side. I see her every day but she doesn't have time to see me, ebony eyes too busy watching babies crying over the hot asphalt Daddy spits and shakes his head. ' Too sorry to buy a car!' Years later a muddy red boot print graces our front door A gift from a long grown child (confident as a ghost who's never been seen) in exchange for the tv in the trunk of a car his Mama never had Daddy spits and shakes his head. ' Well look at where they come from!'

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Date: 12/26/2013 12:33:00 AM
Renee, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 12/18/2013 2:43:00 PM
Renee, enjoyed...,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Renee Lee
Date: 12/18/2013 6:34:00 PM
Thanks! I'll definitely check out your contest.
Date: 12/18/2013 2:05:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Renee ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Renee Lee
Date: 12/18/2013 6:35:00 PM
Thanks for being the first to welcome me, and for taking the time to read. :)

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