South Wind

on bone chilling days wet winter winds sigh and moan grieving over you

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2010 12:37:00 PM

ok,now here is one I missed. The title helps complete this one for the theme of the contest, but the haiku itself stands on its own as a great poem of longing for someone. LUv, Andrea

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/14/2010 4:03:00 PM

A good creative Haiku indeed..Charma

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/31/2010 6:01:00 PM

well said Tim and an excellent reason to welcome Spring. Good luck with this beauty. -Robert

Brian Strand

Date: 1/31/2010 8:41:00 AM

Best wishes in the contest Tim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and welcome comments today

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/30/2010 4:52:00 PM

yes cold bed doesnot warm heart make...sigh.. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2010 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Tim for entering my contest. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/30/2010 11:37:00 AM

Terrific entry....the longing and the waiting are so true!! ~ Great job! ~ Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/29/2010 10:00:00 PM

This is such a beautiful haiku, Tim. I'm glad the coming of spring will help ease your loss. Much love, Carolyn

Marty Owens

Date: 1/29/2010 8:43:00 PM

I love your Haiku especially "grieve over you" ...good luck in the contest...Marty

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/29/2010 7:34:00 PM

Wow, nice work Tim...this one speaks volumes...Raul

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/29/2010 6:59:00 PM

I wish you good luck in Carol's "Waiting for Spring" Contest, Tim. Spring will bring a renewal, for sure. God bless. Peace, audrey