South Florida -The Free Flow Style

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~South Florida~ (Free Flow ) The temperature is rising We're in the hottest days of summer Heat and humidity in the air are soaring Sometimes for days the rains are just pouring This is summer with all its days full of sun and fun People strolls the beach, and swim far beyond the sand Beachcombers spend there their time till the sun goes down Surfing and sunbathing is all a big part of their fun You see children running and playing Some are so happy building sandcastles under the sun There are people of all ages, sexes and shapes Some are sitting, eating and laughing till the day is undone These are the hottest days of summer right where I live here Living in Florida for so many people can be a lot of fun all year. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2005 May.03.2016

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Gary Bateman

Date: 5/4/2016 12:28:00 PM

Hello Dear "D" -- I love Florida as I used to live in Orlando for a year just after retiring from the U.S. Army in 1996. A quite enchanting and beautifully written commentary here on that wonderful state!! TR/FAV!! (Love the attached images too!!) Cheers and Best Wishes from Ingrid and me!! "G"

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/4/2016 6:00:00 PM

Hi again G!Thank you ever so kindly my dear friend Gary,for stopping by again n' commenting so beautifully on my poem here.I'm so glad you liked this piece of mine and the pics too.I deeply appreciate you and your very kind visits, and of course the very wonderful comments you always leave me behind when you visit me.You're always kind to me,G!Thanks for your support and all.I hope that all is going well with your writes, book and in all you do.Always very busy myself here too with a lot of stuff,writing n' lots of art projects too.Sending my love n' prayers to you n' Ingrid as always!Take very good care of each other now, okay, G:))Spill ink!Best to you always!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you!:))D.