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Eating out of a soup can Sitting along the side of a track Thinking about future and the past Thinking about how I will get back The train has done went through Vanished far into the night Sitting now here in the dark Looking for just a hint of light Walking for miles down the track Soon appeared a little twisty trail To travel upon this trail now A light soon showed so very pale As the light came so much closer Found out I was back on the track The light belonged to the little train Searching me out to take me back

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/1/2010 12:04:00 PM
Thanks to all for your wonderful comments. They are much appreciated. Have a great week all.
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Date: 11/1/2010 11:15:00 AM
Hello Kenneth and welcome... So nice to read your words today. I like this one it really inspired me. Keep it flowing. Thank you for stopping by and reading me awhile. As Always, Shar
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Date: 10/24/2010 7:49:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed reading your poem and hope to read more soon
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Date: 10/24/2010 2:25:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kenneth. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2010 12:46:00 PM
Thank you Chris. This is the first poem I posted on this site and I missed where I was suppose to list it. Have a great week.
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Date: 10/24/2010 8:08:00 AM
Thanks so much all.
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Date: 10/24/2010 7:58:00 AM
Could picture the scene! well done
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Date: 10/24/2010 6:57:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today ..with its creative theme... hope u check out the contest page offered to new members on site..good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/24/2010 6:27:00 AM
Very expressive write with good rhyming, Kenneth
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Date: 10/24/2010 6:22:00 AM
Nice rhyme and message....
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