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Sounds of Silence

Sounds of silence I lay flat on the smooth lawn in reverence, Gazing at the sparkling assembly of stars in silence, The wind blew peacefully leaving flowers in a gyrating dance, The ducks floating on the water in the river so tense, The usually tranquil doves quivering cold on the parks’ fence, Naughty monkeys making love in an ecstatic trance, As if in protest, the gods send heavy rains, The monkeys froze on the fence as if fettered by chains, I lay there as the rains broke the sounds of silence, Soaked with little streams meandering in grotesque despondence, I lay there in virgin admiration and adoration of Mother Nature, Mother Nature and sounds of silence worthy of standing ovation, My conscience wonders, my soul ponders, my mind shudders, Always when l lay on this smooth lawn in reverence, Gazing at the sparkling assembly of stars in silence, Listening to the serenity of the sounds of silence.

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Date: 5/28/2014 5:43:00 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Phillip Fungurai
Date: 6/10/2014 5:09:00 AM
Deepest gratitude Dr. Ram Mehta..........Best regards
Date: 5/27/2014 7:07:00 AM
Just beautiful - well done!
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Date: 5/26/2014 8:23:00 PM
Phillip, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Phillip Fungurai
Date: 5/27/2014 1:10:00 PM
*Hugs to you too! thank you for the warm welcome and comment. Im more than glad being your newest poetry soup friend.......best regards.
Date: 5/25/2014 10:00:00 PM
no problem , Philip, thank you for the comment on my comment...PD
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Date: 5/25/2014 6:21:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Phillip. I enjoyed this first, very well written poem you have posted. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Phillip Fungurai
Date: 5/27/2014 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Faye, Your words are much appreciated. Best regards
Date: 5/24/2014 11:29:00 PM
Hi Phillip,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Phillip Fungurai
Date: 5/25/2014 2:42:00 PM
Hi Linda, Deepest gratitude for the warm welcome. l look forward to the poetry contest.
Date: 5/24/2014 3:35:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Phillip :) - I choose your first lovely written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Phillip Fungurai
Date: 5/24/2014 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Anne.....am pleased to be part of the "soup family"

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