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Below is the poem entitled Sounds which was written by poet Abdulhafeez Oyewole. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Patter bubble gum,
Bang a blow from the mouth blow.
A harlot patter.

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 6:04:00 PM
    soup mail...

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:36:00 PM
    Love that middle line of it. Bang a blow, now that is a unique way to say it!

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Picturing an illmannered woman smacking her gum and popping loud bubbles. Perfect imagery and very imaginative :)

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 3:42:00 PM
    Hello OA., lol,,,, i hate the sound of bubble gum smacking... but i love the sound of it when it pops... especially when it splatters all over the face... enjoyed~ Linda