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Patter bubble gum, Bang a blow from the mouth blow. A harlot patter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/20/2013 6:04:00 PM
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Date: 5/19/2013 11:36:00 PM
Love that middle line of it. Bang a blow, now that is a unique way to say it!
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Date: 5/19/2013 7:43:00 PM
Picturing an illmannered woman smacking her gum and popping loud bubbles. Perfect imagery and very imaginative :)
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Date: 5/19/2013 3:42:00 PM
Hello OA., lol,,,, i hate the sound of bubble gum smacking... but i love the sound of it when it pops... especially when it splatters all over the face... enjoyed~ Linda
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