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And so nothing from the Doctor Deep where the MRI creates rumpling noise Clackering sounds Wonder do they think that my mind is not aware Of every moment, waiting for what is next Do I want to go forward wondering what is next See what the Doctors want to try In this well known place up in the hill Away from the ocean breezes The barking of sea lions The sounds of cars and other chariots Moving through the dusk The sprinkilng sounds of music What's next as the winds murmur The weight of it all The weight I wonder Its Christmas quiet prayer Soft sounds and stillness

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Date: 1/29/2024 3:20:00 AM
It's the not knowing and not being in control that presents problems. I hope all is well as can be with you Linda. Your wonderful poem encapsulates you and your mind caught in a system that takes over. It's heartfelt, real and just a wonderful piece deserving of many more views and comments.. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 12/23/2023 5:29:00 AM
Lovely sentiments Linda..
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