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Souls in Shackled Sleep

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Souls in Shackled Sleep

mind – will – emotions awaken carpe diem hibernating dreams

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  1. Date: 2/9/2011 5:16:00 PM
    Well-written senryu. It's not easy to write one, but you did it here.

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 12:29:00 PM
    Great Senryu, Abe. Short but VERY sweet! Big Smiles, Dane Ann (soupmail)

  1. Date: 11/10/2009 5:54:00 PM
    I'm not sure how I missed this poem back when it was first submitted, but it's a gem!! Hello Abe....hope all is well! I miss seeing your poetry on the soup, and hope you will be back with your wonderful poetry soon! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 9:06:00 AM
    Excellent Senyru Abe >> James

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 10:10:00 AM
    Awesome title and very different write here, Abe that I'm sure will be a winner in Sami's contest !! Hope you have a fun-filled Halloween weekend!

  1. Date: 10/27/2009 5:17:00 PM
    I like your "hibernating dreams", Abe! Keep your pen flowing and thanks for your comments..Gert

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 11:39:00 AM
    Good luck in Sami's Contest, Abe. This senryu is awesome. Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 7:59:00 AM
    Hibernating dreams-beautiful verse--wonderful senryu Abe-Charma

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 12:56:00 PM
    Nothing feels more constraining than the shackling of the "mind - will - emotions." Amen to this carpe diem! Great work, Abe! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 12:20:00 PM
    Best of luck in the contest, nice Senryu, that last line was a kicker...Raul

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 11:42:00 AM
    Good luck in the contest. Interesting thoughts. Keep writing. Sara