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Soulful

He closed his eyes and heaved a sigh and thought, 'I know it's time to die. I hope what's there is kind to me, and now it's time to see...!' His body laying cold and dead, his spirit hovered overhead, and as he floated like a kite, he searched in vain for light. The light he'd heard awaited him just wasn't there, not even dim - he realised then, with a groan, 'I'm doomed to roam alone.' written 18th November for Robert's Soul poem

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Date: 11/26/2021 11:58:00 PM
Hi Jack, a very well crafted poem totally apt for the contest - i noticed that congrats are in order. Thanks for your visits Jack and your lovely comments, Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/21/2021 9:42:00 AM
One to give the shivers. Congrats on creative write and placement. Robert
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Date: 11/20/2021 6:27:00 AM
Very interesting story of the soul. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/18/2021 7:37:00 PM
Hello Jack ... a fine verse with flowing lines. I did enjoy your poem Jack - Lindsay
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Date: 11/18/2021 3:18:00 PM
oh why you took a gloomy though humorous path with this contest. I enjoyed this , Jack!!
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Date: 11/18/2021 8:38:00 AM
Well, you got the gruesome part down. Creative work for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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