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My Soul To Take “Now I lay me down to sleep I pray the Lord my soul to keep. And if I die before I wake I pray the Lord my soul to take”. She walked me right up to it and then she walked me through it. As I hung on words she'd say the prayer my mom taught me to pray. Then as I lay me down to sleep I'd hear her as she'd softly weep. How can this be? We prayed we prayed. Still her torment. It just stayed. Sneaking through the house that night to stay with her til morning light. Visions of me the hero in my head I climbed so quietly in her bed. Not one sound made, no not one peep. I pray the Lord my soul to keep. Stealth I guess I'd always lack. As mother held the covers back. Both are safe now for awhile tears replaced by sleepy smile. And if I die before I wake I knew my mothers heart would break. So keep us safe Lord her and I within Your grace don't let us die. But if You need for heavens sake Here am I Lord Yours to take.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/23/2015 3:51:00 PM
Well "looky there" it's Edwin....back on Soup.....I'm singing Etta James Song..."At Last"......
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Date: 6/23/2015 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations Edwin...May all your blue shirts deserve Starch!
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Date: 6/21/2015 2:03:00 PM
Edwin, A lovely poem. Congrats on the win. Lanette Kissel
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Date: 6/21/2015 1:43:00 AM
This is a nice win
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Date: 6/21/2015 1:04:00 AM
Edwin, congratulations on your Prayer time Memory win. LINDA
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Date: 6/20/2015 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations, Edwin. You did a fabulous job of capturing the reasoning of a young boy climbing into his mother's bed. Boys. the ever-chivalrous. :)
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Date: 6/20/2015 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations Edwin....
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Date: 6/20/2015 7:42:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) So lovely to share the podium with you Edwin:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/25/2015 7:58:00 AM
Moving and powerful; that's quite a different take on an old prayer.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/25/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thank you M. L. God bless!!
Date: 5/22/2015 8:26:00 AM
Sad sentiments and a graceful approach to the meaning brought to our lives through prayer. Emile.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/22/2015 9:22:00 AM
It's not the direction I planned to take. But I know as a poet, you know how that goes sometimes. You just have to follow your heart. Thank you sir and God bless. Ed
Date: 5/22/2015 6:50:00 AM
a lovely spiritual write Edwin:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/22/2015 9:22:00 AM
Thank you as always Island girl. :)

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