Soul Taker

there is a man that is in pain and he is just sitting in the dark waitting for you. But he goes and look's for his prey. And he took his soul, looking into his eye's, and taking out his soul when he is in a dark, Then his soul let's you die.

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Willie Wright

Date: 8/12/2012 3:27:00 PM

I wish that I could post a poem I wrote about your subject. The poem is dark and chilling. I really don't care what another thinks of me, God has made me who I am and theres is nothing I can do to changed that. I just don't wish to offend anyone who may have been through the experience. Perhaps one day I will. I love the title...for me their is only one who collects souls, and that one is God. Thank for your poem.

Cindy Leon
Date: 8/12/2012 3:31:00 PM

i am glade you like it.