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Soul Survivor I am a soul survivor of a ship that's lost at sea. You might hear my cries at night but still you won't see me. Aimlessly I drift about I don't know how it started. Trying to find and comfort just one more brokenhearted. Lightening often lights my way as you look for a friend. I am just a memory that's guided by the wind. Stopping only for a moment I linger in your pain. Listening to the thunder as tears mix with the rain. A ghost is what I am today and what I'll always be. I am a soul survivor of a ship that's lost at sea. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 4/26/2015 1:49:00 PM
beautiful but such sad imagery I found it quite emotional reading this - the intense feeling of being so alone:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/26/2015 1:30:00 PM
Beautiful but sad...well done
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Date: 4/26/2015 1:20:00 PM
- Really well written, Edwin ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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