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Soul Surfer

"Soul Surfer"
I bought some sea shell beads today, stood by the ocean while the half sharp winter wind washed through me and whispered stinging sticatto cold licks next to my ear, so sincerely - that spot, you know that spot you know where, where warm breath should imprint fast, hard and so hot, the sharp winter wind caresses that spot all too urgently entices, whispers, "stay with me, or move away...your choice". I stayed, I listened while the sharp winter wind toyed with me, washed perilously close all around me, but not through me; that half sharp Winter wind, it beckoned, wrapped its ethereal sinuous arms around me and whispered ever so superlunary, "Come unto me, next chapter my dear! which way to steer? Stay moored? Or push off through it all, harbour's not the place to live life after all. Push out and away cut through all of the shallows - cut straight out through the deep, past the shark nets and fat furry seals that do bellow, where monsters with sharp teeth glide insolently next to you, all the while beckoning, go deeper go deep diving for pearls, you oblige and dive deep. There was an Ancient Mariner...she remembered and an albatross soaring so high a good omen in the minds of brilliant enlightenment dodging harpoons of the ignorant while she twirled and pirouetted with St Elmo's Fire; and all the while a Phoenix rose burning from a funeral pyre, trilling, "Onward and upward I'll move closer to thee". And onward and upward she rose higher and higher so close to the sun it was mortally dire but the Sun was warmer than the sharp winter wind, that grew colder and deadlier, drunk on flippant transparent whims; that was the mirror she did not want to enfold, she determined stronger and stronger she would kiss the Sun before she grew ancient and the Moon became bolder, bold enough to shine moonbeams on her battered body bathed in light she was Gold, Golder than Light and he was the Night dark indigo velvet draping his body around her swift flight. At some point the Moon Kisses the Sun, like two souls searching the other side of a mirror hand to mirror hand to mirror closer but never, not nearer. The Moon Kisses the Sun in the ocean's reflection when day is all done; Never so clearer. (Lovejoy-Burton/November 2017)

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Date: 11/1/2019 6:40:00 AM
I'm enchanted by the soul surfer, the moon, the sun, the ocean... draping his body around her swift flight...this pulls and draws...TS x
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Date: 11/5/2019 6:15:00 AM
: ))
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/1/2019 7:02:00 AM
lol
Date: 12/24/2017 5:53:00 AM
I want to wish you a dream come true on this Christmas day...and to thank you for being a friend here...It's a blessing to share poetry with you...again...I wish you a dream come true, Leanne
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 12/24/2017 7:29:00 AM
That is very kind and gracious of you Arturo. Thank you for such a lovely thought and gesture. I hope you are surrounded by your loved ones and / or friends this Christmas and New Year and that you have a safe, peaceful and joyous Christmas period full of Love and all the good things in life. It is an honour to be granted your friendship. I look forward to immersing myself in your next instalment of poetry/stories. Tomorrow I will immerse myself in the Ocean...Merry Christmas. Leanne
Date: 12/5/2017 1:46:00 AM
Arrangement of words is nice, idea is superb. Beautiful words used beautifully to add beauty. Could feel high heart beats of hearty poem.Go on Fine words at fine position with fine devices. Great work! Words are few to show your talent. Be blessed and keep reviewing Pari Style poems.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 12/7/2017 8:51:00 PM
Thanks Sanket Jain. I appreciate your encouragement. I will now go and check out your creations...:)
Date: 12/5/2017 1:44:00 AM
Theme is nicely chosen,so are words in your poem. Different syllable and iambic made your poem sound better. Rhetorical devices really add beauty to the poem. Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style
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Date: 12/5/2017 1:44:00 AM
Theme is nicely chosen,so are words in your poem. Different syllable and iambic made your poem sound better. Rhetorical devices really add beauty to the poem. Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style
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