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Soul Storm

The ember waves precedes nights calling,
Droplets of truth trickle up my spine,
The wind shifts in an inward direction,
Spots of light show themselves to me,
I am blinded by mine own knowing,
It’s radiation, earth quivering under my feet,
The branches are fiercely swaying with persistence,
And so, the seeds scatter,
And there is breath,
There is life!

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  1. Date: 1/1/2014 5:11:00 PM
    Hi Jody, a sweet little ending... , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 10:42:00 PM
    Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Jody... wow. on the 2 ending lines.., Your first poem on the soup is excellent and deep for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 1:48:00 PM
    - Welcome to P-Soup, Jody ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)