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Soul Mate

One of us is already dead, One of us is still living, I can't get out of my head, All the love you keep giving. For one of us, our blood is cold, For one of us, our blood is hot, My life continues to unfold, While you have begun to rot. One of our hearts is still beating, One of our hearts is now silent, We have to wait, I keep repeating, But, somehow you remain defiant. Your soul will continue to roam, Your soul mate will always be here, Here, you shall always have a home, So, please, please, just stay near. I know that you are my soul mate, I know that I am yours forever, I promise we'll meet on a future date, We are entwined, and that you cannot sever.

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Sam Scott

Date: 1/7/2024 6:29:00 AM

Oh the ache in this is palpable. I do like it as it rings true. Kelly, you tug at my heart strings here and I warm to your poetic style. (fav)

Mark Peterson

Date: 5/5/2016 10:22:00 PM

Kind words told to your special someone whom you're still waiting to meet. The chance of it ever happening is but once in the entire history of the universe. But, just watch, it will happen anyway.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/24/2016 11:21:00 AM

Your encouraging words really give me a true sense of hope that love will come my way... Thank you so much for that, Mark :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 2/25/2016 11:50:00 AM

Real good one Kelly!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/14/2016 11:34:00 PM

Thank you, Gordon :)

Afroze Ali

Date: 2/1/2014 4:31:00 AM

Nice write Kelly Congratulations on the win

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/1/2014 5:08:00 PM

Thank you very much for the kind words! I appreciate you stopping by. :)

Skat A

Date: 1/31/2014 9:30:00 AM

KELLY, :) thanks you for the wonderful winning poem. Enjoy your day. Love ~ SKAT~

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/31/2014 9:20:00 PM

Thank you for the placement, SKAT! I appreciate it very much, and I hope that you enjoy your day, too. :)

Robin Davis

Date: 12/10/2013 8:48:00 AM

Kelly Such a sad and deeply moving poem of two hearts that are having problems being joined. You tell a story that stirs the readers feelings and breaks their heart. Nice job Hugs Thanks for the awesome and true comment on my Inner Kindness poem.

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/31/2013 4:51:00 AM

I hope you don't mind me reviewing your poems. I truly like them. You did a lovely job on this one Kelly.

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/30/2013 1:50:00 AM

I can't get out of my head I can't get you out of my head some words are not needed they kind of drag the action One of our hearts is still beating, One of our hearts is now silent,# We have to wait, I keep repeating, But, somehow you remain defiant.# One of our hearts is silent, But you remain defiant!

Rachel Tate

Date: 8/18/2013 10:53:00 AM

wow, sad face for lost love, even if they can look for each-other first in their next life. nice work on the poem though.