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Soul Extraction

the mist creates suspense, to break down all defence jackal chase to disguise, the unholy abscise

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/6/2023 7:12:00 AM

Afraid of the dark, or what lies within...spooky! Congratulations Di11y! :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/6/2023 7:55:00 AM

These are out in the daylight mwa ha ha haaa (thank you!)

Suzette Richards

Date: 11/6/2023 1:04:00 AM

Congratulations, Di11y Da11y on your win. This alexandrine couplet really intrigued me - it put me in mind of a fox hunt (don't quote me, as I have been known to be wrong). Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and even more so with poetry. Thank you for your ongoing support of my contests. Regards, Suzette

Suzette Richards
Date: 11/6/2023 5:16:00 AM

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/6/2023 1:08:00 AM

I had a beast of the moors in mind but very much a petrified chase that turns out badly for the pursued! Thank you for the placement, took all my brain cells and a few edits each time I read the tick list. A fun challenge x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/14/2023 3:05:00 PM

Your "Soul Extraction" is a wonderful Alexandrine write. Few words with much said. Have a blessed weekend..........

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/14/2023 3:22:00 PM

Thank you Paula - much appreciated x

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/14/2023 2:31:00 PM

loved the title of this Alexandrine...you created suspense with your words...and I loved 'unholy abscise. enjoy your weekend, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/14/2023 2:37:00 PM

Thanks Sara x

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/14/2023 4:18:00 AM

Wow! Suzette will love this, I'm sure, DD:)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/14/2023 1:32:00 PM

Thank you Jo, I've struggled with understanding the intricacies of the request for this contest. So I'm sure I'll have made a mistake. I enjoyed having a go though. Thank you for your kind words x