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Soul Discovery

Out of all the amazing beings In this infinite universe My soul called out to yours Ready to immerse A strangely familiar feeling That's something I'll have to get use to A once in a lifetime love My eternal déjà vu I see visions of our destiny In your jade green eyes It lucidly paints our forever home Surrounded by blue skies This all could be said in fewer words Or a simpler way to say That your soul ignites a fire inside me That only poetry can convey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/17/2016 12:25:00 AM
Beautiful Write!!! Jen
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Date: 3/16/2015 10:02:00 AM
One of the best valentines presents I have ever received...I am so lucky to be in love with you
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Date: 2/28/2015 8:54:00 PM
Lisa, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/27/2015 9:50:00 PM
Lisa, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/24/2015 10:04:00 PM
Lovely. Hi Lisa, welcome to PoetrySoup. Let others get to know you and your writes by visiting other pages and commenting on theirs. :DKim PS. You might want to check on the 3rd stanza, seems the 4th line got lost somewhere. Hugs
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Date: 2/24/2015 1:06:00 PM
"A fire in me that only poetry can convey" such beautiful words. Def 7
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Lisa Chapman
Date: 2/24/2015 1:11:00 PM
Thank you!

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