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I don't know who I am I fear Maybe I'll never see it clear I contemplate the real me Oh Lord please allow me to see I match emotions with my own When I'm by your side I feel known Unlock my heart, let me be free Oh Lord please allow me to see I sense the forward path to take Hold your hand, a success we'll make Good intentions, that is the key Oh Lord please allow me to see

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Date: 8/17/2023 10:36:00 AM
Beautiful kyrielle DD! A wonderful prayer for pure eyesight. Congratulations on your win! Clear eyed blessings to you!
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Date: 8/17/2023 10:38:00 AM
Haha thanks Sam :)
Date: 8/17/2023 1:47:00 AM
Back with warmest congratulations on your win, DD ~ well deserved
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Date: 8/17/2023 2:39:00 AM
Thank you! I quite like these styles now I've tried them - so melodic and soothing :)
Date: 8/17/2023 1:31:00 AM
Wonderful write. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 8/17/2023 2:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Gina x
Date: 7/31/2023 7:00:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, nicely worded, I like the forward path line :)
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Date: 7/31/2023 11:49:00 PM
Thank you Hat :D
Date: 7/30/2023 11:04:00 PM
A deep soulful inquiry, DD. Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/30/2023 11:10:00 PM
Thank you, I appreciate your kind words

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