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Soul (Cinquain Tag To James Fraser)

Soul Everlasting spirit Carries us high Enjoy soaring through life Soul

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2018 3:49:00 AM

so lovely to see this little gem on the featured poems page, so uplifting:-) hugs Jan xx

Kash Poet

Date: 5/27/2011 12:55:00 PM

An uplifting write from you Carolyn.Enjoyed...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/2/2009 6:44:00 AM

James is indeed a beautiful soul and u have worded your poem so expertly... it conveys so much ... relating to each other... wonderful write, Carolyn.. and I am quite honored by HG's poem for me and my doll ... thankxxx for your open heart in welcoming me into the Soup family... Every poet is a distinct creator of verse and versatility... happy to belong and share.. Linda-Marie

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 10/24/2009 10:03:00 PM

Another very nice write, inspirational. Thank you for sharing your poetry. Love, Caroline.

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/6/2009 4:02:00 PM

Did you ever hear the song by Procul Harem which say,"It's all so simple really if you just look to your soul" Enjoy soaring! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/25/2009 3:51:00 AM

I especially like your "Everlasting spirit carries us high", Carolyn! Nicely written Cinquin. And thanks for commentig Autum. Love, Gert

Danny Nunn

Date: 9/20/2009 9:53:00 PM

I like this one!!! good write. Thanks for your words on Lawyers today. I agree with you there are bound to be some good one? Like a needle in a hay stack, hard to find? I have read the Bible many times, but yet to find a passage that says they are devine....thanks Danny Nunn

Constance La France

Date: 9/19/2009 5:21:00 PM

aaah... the soul... it is truly everlasting.. very nice

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/16/2009 6:53:00 PM

Nice Cinquain! I like that form and have experimented with it myself. I wonder if you know that it was invented by Adelaide Crapsey in 1931. Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/16/2009 5:11:00 PM

Soup mail!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/15/2009 7:29:00 AM

nicely done, cinquain

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/14/2009 6:56:00 PM

soup-mail

Donna Golden

Date: 9/14/2009 2:55:00 PM

Lovely, Carolyn! I believe that if we focused more on the soul--it's development, those of our friends and family, and treating them as precious, we would all be SO much more happy and fulfilled! Hugs, Donna

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/14/2009 10:48:00 AM

living life to the fullest ......an uplift write here Carolyn, very nice!

Cecil Hickman

Date: 9/13/2009 3:23:00 PM

beautifully penned from your talent and spirtualism that shows in style and grace within,,and as always thank you for reading and leaving such endearing words upon mine,,,blessings..Cecil

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/13/2009 5:48:00 AM

love the insight to this carolyn the imagery was refreshing too nice tag off to jim want to see his response also thanks for stopping by with your kind comment keep up the wonderful work

Brian Strand

Date: 9/13/2009 12:40:00 AM

Nice one Carolyn.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/12/2009 11:59:00 PM

thanks for comments! my friend...lol. yes! you nailed it! I just thought it was time for me to add some of my 'special sauce' to the soup!!!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/12/2009 5:51:00 PM

uplifting poem! Carolyn! I enjoy reading truth like this!...and thanks for your loving support!...jimbo

P Sheart

Date: 9/12/2009 2:33:00 PM

Carolyn, Ah yes, spirit does carry us high. Soul never forgets....A lovely awe inspiring Cinquain. Amazingly beautiful....Thanks so much for your love, support, you're quite gifted with foresight. Take care hun Love Light Truth Patricia

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/12/2009 12:06:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn for your always kind comments. This is a vivid description of a soul. Love, Joyce

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/11/2009 5:25:00 PM

Carolyn, This poem has such sweetness to it. It is a joy to soar through life on the wings of the beauty that God created for us to enjoy. Thank you for this write that brought a pause of peacefulness to this soul. I love you. Love, Dane

Sara Lokken

Date: 9/11/2009 9:18:00 AM

It's sad that many people don't see their soul. Beautiful reminder...Love, Sara:)

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/11/2009 8:04:00 AM

This is beautiful, Carolyn. This game of tag is interesting and inspiring! The form is lovely. Great work, my friend! Love, Robin

Daver Austin

Date: 9/11/2009 6:52:00 AM

Glad to hear you're settled in. Got your new phone number. How is the publication thing going...heard anything? Love, daver