Sorrow's Drink

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2011 11:17:00 PM

A good one to show the emotion of sorrow! I liked the reference to nine lives.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2011 4:31:00 PM

Joseph, you could teach us a few things about writing poetry. Don't underestimate your talent. There was a good reason your poem ranked first in my last contest. I saw fresh, incredible talent and deep emotion. I was struck by it as soon as I read it and immediately it rose to the top. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2011 10:14:00 AM

I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Joseph. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/24/2011 9:58:00 AM

Sometimes when we're really depressed, we feel like we're losing our minds, Joey. Don't go banking on death's door anymore, though. We'd like to keep you around for a while. Compelling poem. Love, Carolyn