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Sorrows Bypass

I hide in a niche within myself Furtively blinding the self from truth The ravenous tongue knows It is the other side of The hidden tank sealed with dried tears The rivers of sorrow bypass my heart And I smile at my isolated victory Proud that I didn't crack down When another bereavement knocked On my door and left me weirdly silent The lone fugitive peeps through the slits Hungering for the love of the departed Perhaps another day the warm sun Will ride into my heart to stay till eternity March 14, 2016 Contest: Fugitive Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 4/7/2016 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your very well-deserved win Balveen! Hope to see more of your poems in the future! :) -HANS
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/7/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thanks Hansteven!
Date: 4/6/2016 11:58:00 PM
Balveen, congratulations on your awesome "Fugitive Win." Linda
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/7/2016 4:43:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 4/5/2016 5:26:00 PM
Sad, but a lovely, well-written poem, Balveen. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/7/2016 4:43:00 AM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 4/5/2016 4:08:00 PM
Congrats on the winning work..Sara
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/7/2016 4:44:00 AM
Thanks, dear Sara!
Date: 4/5/2016 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this emotional write. Janice
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/7/2016 4:44:00 AM
Thanks Janice!
Date: 4/5/2016 4:47:00 AM
Great work Balveen.. well deserved win.. big congrats!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/5/2016 12:44:00 PM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 4/5/2016 2:45:00 AM
Hi... When I whittle poems down to eight, the name Balveen Cheema magically appears when I eventually see the names of exactly who are my finalists. :) This is the second time, I think. A lovely poem. Well done, Julia
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/5/2016 12:46:00 PM
Thank you, Julia! Just no words to express my thanks and joy!

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