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Sorrow and Pain

Sorrow & Pain Our love was fresh It was full of excitement & glee But what has become of it? but sorrow & pain... A happy game of hid & seek Of laughter & mystery But what has become of it? But sorrow & pain... The chaste but hidden kisses The love and kindness in your eyes But what has become of it? But sorrow and pain... Our intent was true & lovely Absence really made our hearts grow fonder But what has become of it? But sorrow and pain...

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/31/2014 2:19:00 PM

I'm glad this is from a few years ago. I hope love has been kinder since then. A lovely piece. A belated welcome to the soup.

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/31/2014 2:38:00 PM

Richard, well thank you. Yes this was a time long ago. I just love poetry soup and have had a lot of fun posting my poems and reading others.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/7/2014 1:38:00 AM

Of course, will you marry me? ( kidding ) Reading the poets here for me is also selfish, as it give me inspiration!!! Beautiful poems are always a pleasure to read!

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/7/2014 7:44:00 AM

Already then. I don't know about you but I get a rush after writing a poem and reading ones as well. I appreciate fellow poets reading my work and I love to read the comments! Thank you.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/6/2014 10:46:00 PM

in the rain....... Loved this one

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/7/2014 12:39:00 AM

Arthur, thank you. This one I wrote a few years ago. I felt much peace after writing it. Will you continue reading my poems? I love the comments. Meg

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/3/2014 8:26:00 PM

Only tragedy can explain the sorrow and pain of lost love gain Megan. I know the song of this poem, and I love it despite the sadness. " Our intent was true and lovely..." that really speaks to my heart. J.A.B.

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/3/2014 8:54:00 PM

Justin, awe thank you for reading my poems. It means a lot I admire your works as well. Its so intense and passionate.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/2/2014 12:36:00 PM

deep touching very beautifully painted piece meg bless you

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/2/2014 4:12:00 PM

Liam, awe thank you. This one I wrote a few years ago when I was in a dark place. The words just poured out onto paper where they are at peace now.

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 11/20/2014 7:28:00 AM

Sorrow and pain,your poem's main,enjoyed reading.Best wishes dear poet Meg. -Safa

Meg Anderson
Date: 11/20/2014 12:27:00 PM

thank you. This was a time where I had so many feelings and just had to write them out.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/20/2014 7:03:00 AM

Hi Meg! Welcome to Poetrysoup! I love the naked reality portrayed in your poetry. Enjoy being part of this Big Poets' Family! ^_^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2014 2:23:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Meg - I choose your first sad but well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Meg Anderson
Date: 11/17/2014 10:56:00 AM

awe thanks. I truly love this site. Yes continue to read more I love the feedback!