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Sorrow

If my sorrow was a color I would imagine it as gray Not the black of nothingness But the shadows in my day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/6/2014 8:21:00 AM
Very good way to describe it Barbara....congratulations on a great win....
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Date: 4/6/2014 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win. I enjoyed the poem, barbara
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Date: 4/5/2014 9:14:00 PM
You portrayed sorrow very well, Barbara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 4/5/2014 3:59:00 PM
a picture of sorrow, personal sorrow, is hard to judge from the outside. Daily shadows can be haunting; I took a chance on Friday which came out to my favor, but there is that nagging "grayness" of what if... Good piece, it takes me to reflecting on my days.
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Date: 4/4/2014 9:15:00 PM
well done! SKAT
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Date: 4/4/2014 5:30:00 PM
Barbara, congratulations...Linda
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Date: 4/4/2014 1:03:00 PM
well done... I love the lines... the color of sorrow... Congratulations, Barbara!!! :o))
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Date: 4/4/2014 12:54:00 AM
Barbara, I almost wish I'd put this higher reading it again just now! It's a very nice little poem to evoke sadness. Congrats in my contest.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/4/2014 9:49:00 AM
I must admit, Im disappointed. Wont be the first, surely not the last time. Thanks..

Book: Shattered Sighs