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Soon~very end~the last day Vacation comes to close There are sighing pines and tear drops While packing some of clothes Life is filled with many options Even without great riches How we choose to use each minute Determines most hitches One word spoken lashing outward Can change the form of day From it flowing like a slow tide To a tsunami astray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/11/2013 6:08:00 PM
so much wisdom woven together in beauty Shadow x
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Date: 6/10/2013 7:55:00 PM
You are right a kind word or smile can make a day and a mean one can echo for years.
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Date: 6/10/2013 7:16:00 PM
Excellent rhythm in this comely write Sara.
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Date: 6/10/2013 3:49:00 PM
This is an incredible write my friend, quite the phenomenal poem Sara! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a masterfully written poem here, such a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/10/2013 2:02:00 PM
What a build-up. Fantastic word flow here.
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